This is a little taste of a short story i am working on. (I don't have a title yet) Tell me what you think so far. Feedback is greatly appreciated!

    
     She doesn't like being told what to do with her work especially when she really likes what’s she’s written. So she changes it temporarily changes it until no one is watching and then changes it back. But it never matters anyway because she is the most fickle person I know. So, no matter what you tell her or what she tells herself, a page and a half into it she’ll decide she doesn't like it, crumple up the paper and start fresh with a one. That’s just who she is, fickle and insecure.